Very intense poem with a clear message. My condolences to the way you were treated. We survive but surviving isn't always the same as living. :)

This is good piece, very powerful with some intense content. Though the structure could be improved the content more than makes up for this making a fantastic piece of writing overall. Very well written and powerful piece with some fantastic expression

Jenna I Love you more then you will even no.. but sence you love me more i guess you do no.. iam always here for you no matter what type of a problem i am in.. always dear. :love:

Love Your Effin Paper