It was kind of hard to follow from time to time, either because of typos, or maybe because I just stumbled or iono... just something...

anyways... good job, i loved the meaning and the way you wrote it!

**meggie**

Great poem! -May

What a great poem you really know how to fit your words, your poetry is just amazing. Keep it up, check out some of mine to if you can cheers.

~**White Blizzard**~

Gud poem...i think dere was some typos or suttin but wen i figured out da word it made sense...so gud job...5/5