I think you've got some great ideas here.. but it doesnt flow as well as it could.. in my opinion its a 4 out of 5 but i saw it was voted as a 2 so i voted a 5 anyway just to boost that up for you =) *smiles*

Hey, I know how you feel, but don't worry the right guy will come along and when he does you'll know it....I know you're think "thats what everybody says" but trust me I know, I never thought the guy I'm with would wnat me...but he does:) don't worry the right guy for you will come:)

I love it- it could flow better but the feeling your expressing is totally worth a 5!!!

I like it..

5

Very nice poem i just wrote a poem "I WISH" check it out