by LadyPearl Jun 13, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Borne from a kin of raging fire |
by RetroRavey
That was a really long poem, but it told a great story and left me wanting more. Please continue it. |
Woah. thats cool. very detailed. lovd ur use of wording! thnx for the r/c on my two, i appreciate it. this was amazing. keep up the gr8 work. |
by Kim
This is a really unique poem, I like the story behind it. "Not wanting to murder an ocean of souls:Not wanting to murder an ocean of souls" I enjoyed that line in particular. I jave a few suggestions: |