"cos I couldn't bear to see, the look in your eye if you saw the real me." This is my favourite line in this poem.
Enitially this poem made me want to burst into tears, because of how well i can relate to it. but i didnt! whoo.
you have a real talent at provokin emotion in a reader. It's amazing. I love your style of writing.
I'll eventually read over the rest of ur work and let u know what i think. :) thanks for the comment,
yours xxx Kin

Awww....This poem made me cry....*cries* this is exactly how i feel and it hurts so much... this is my favorite lines
"You enter the room and I catch your eye,
and its all i can do not to run and cry.
Cos I know that when you look at me,
I'm not who you really see."
everytime i see that person...i have all i can do to just sit there and not cry as well....it hurts to have ppl not know the real you....this poem was brilliant everything about it,it was moving and i enjoyed it :D
love,
steph

I love this one, i can really relate to what you write u have a great talent keep it up!!

Oh wow this is good. i love it...i can kinda relate to it.
good job

This poem has a lot of meaning
i really like it
p.s thanks for the comment on my poem. it meant a lot.

You are great at your writing!

Love it... you have some talent