"I just wawasn't good enough,"
spelling error, I think you can pick it out
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Good ending, and nice use of metaphor with the gold-foil wings. This poem was nice and short, which let it get by on such little specificity and descriptive prose. If this were a longer poem, I'd expect some more details.

This is great i like it alot. and thx for the coment u left

keenan