by Denise Butler Jun 13, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Hearts falling in a downward spiral |
by Bloomed Rose
I agree with holly, you used repitition nicely in this poem! your a good poet! 5/5 AGAIN! |
by HOLLY ARMER
Well done! I usually don't like repitition within a poem, but you worked it nicely in this. I hardly noticed. |