by Phantasmagoria Jun 13, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Red and Black |
by Ariana
Wow, the feeling of despair is illustrated nicely in this write. I like the shortness of it and the disjointed sentences, they work well with the tone of this poem. The imagery is quite graphic and unpleasant which also suits. A depressing piece, but well written :) |
I love the imagery. |