by Brittany Jun 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The day we first met, |
by Jeremy
Wow really good tahnx i know exactly how you feel |
by -] Nobody [-
Very well written and I thought it was nicely expressed. The first half of the poem to me felt like it flowed much better and came from deep inside of your heart... the last half seemed to me like you were struggling to get it out. Either way... I think it was great 5/5 - keep it up girl |