Great poem with a lot of deep feelings. I liked when you said "he's going to wish i was there but i won't be and then he'll care" Keep writing.

-Jason

Awesome write, I loved it. the emotion was intense. I absoulutly loved it. Keep up the amazing peices of work.

Peace, Joe

Melly that's really deep. Did this experiance happen to you? I hope it didn't cause that's a sad tale. Keep it up. I want to read more of YOUR poetry Mel.

Tammy

Really really gd nd ur whole words r gr8 !! i wish i could write like that :( lol well dun !!

Thats a great poem, I know how you feel.

well I can't think of anything else to say so I'mma go

Awwwww i luv it!!! I can so relate!!! Keep it up!

Thats awsome cause thats what happens to alot of guys

I fined that so true keep writing and stay true to your heart

Wow.. Just Amazing Mel. I love it! You better keep writing cause you're a GREAT poet Mel.

Great poem.. i have a poem that u might like 2 read called Move On.... because i do believe truelove iz the same anywho as i read on in the poem there was a nice constant flow of uprising emotion... ty :)

I realy understand this poem. i know to who we love when they gone without saying anything any reason.. how it is felt then. i realy understand how u feel in this poem..... tht was the deep feelings from your heart. your these feelings touched my heart and a drop of one tear fall from my eyes. gr8 wrk. u have talent. take care