by Wasted Fake Smiles Jun 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Behind every tear, is an untold tale, |
by RetroRavey
I loved this poem when you put it in my contest, and I still love it now. |
by Rain
It was in the right category, lol! that poem is very true, and I love it! it flowed so nicely and....it sounded, great! you have a great talent, don't waste it. |
by IfIhide11
I dont think you should change anything about this poem. It was wonderful. it deserves a 5/5. |
by David Moss
Enjoyed this one too - especially your closing. Wouldnt change a thing, and hey, you can always tell me to stuff it if I make any suggestions you don't like. And thanks for critiquing some of mine. |
by RetroRavey
You wrote this in my contest. YAY!!!!!! I loved it. Keep it up, cuz all ur stuff is freaking great. |