Untold Story

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jun 14, 2006


Behind every tear, is an untold tale,
Some new and fresh, others old and stale.
Behind each scar, an untold lie,
Another time you wanted to die.

Behind each door slam, an untold story,
Another reason, to say sorry.
Behind each break up, an untold heart break,
With so much pain, and so much ache.

An untold story, lies in everything we do,
I have one right now, and so do you!
So tell your stories, hide no more,
Forget about slamming your bedroom door.

An untold story, might try to escape so hard,
But deep inside it remains in jail, barred.
The one day, your mind can’t take, and explodes,
So tell your untold stories, in little, simple, loads.

~*Who Cares?*~
I don't know where to put this poem, please let me know if it doesn't fit here. I don't know...

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  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I loved this poem when you put it in my contest, and I still love it now.

    Rave

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    It was in the right category, lol! that poem is very true, and I love it! it flowed so nicely and....it sounded, great! you have a great talent, don't waste it.

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    I dont think you should change anything about this poem. It was wonderful. it deserves a 5/5.

    -ifihide

  • 18 years ago

    by David Moss

    Enjoyed this one too - especially your closing. Wouldnt change a thing, and hey, you can always tell me to stuff it if I make any suggestions you don't like. And thanks for critiquing some of mine.
    Cheers and good writing DM

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    You wrote this in my contest. YAY!!!!!! I loved it. Keep it up, cuz all ur stuff is freaking great.

    truly,
    RLS