This is wonderful! i love these kind of poems. they give you hope and a new outlook on life. thnx so much for sharing. we all have untold stories that we keep to ourselves, but yeah... sometimes they do need to come out.

You wrote this in my contest. YAY!!!!!! I loved it. Keep it up, cuz all ur stuff is freaking great.

truly,
RLS

Enjoyed this one too - especially your closing. Wouldnt change a thing, and hey, you can always tell me to stuff it if I make any suggestions you don't like. And thanks for critiquing some of mine.
Cheers and good writing DM

I dont think you should change anything about this poem. It was wonderful. it deserves a 5/5.

-ifihide

It was in the right category, lol! that poem is very true, and I love it! it flowed so nicely and....it sounded, great! you have a great talent, don't waste it.

I loved this poem when you put it in my contest, and I still love it now.

Rave