Dang car....that was so SWEET...dang. that was practically all sugar, lol!! It was great though...really. Heart warming even.

Awwwwwwwwww this is really cute,
5/5

Superb work... This speaks volumes about the restrained love you may have someone. A fantastic piece, emitting love and sorrow. Dreams and fantasy rolled into one. Beautifully done!!

Absolutely beautiful...! i related pretty much to it. would want to read more of your poems. good work. keep it up.

Wow that was a great poem!

Really good poem.
~emS~

Oh my gosh. this poem is so fantastic. it's exactly the same way I feel. it's almost like you took all my thoughts and put them into words. =|