Great poem!

xoxoxo Haley

Great poem
sad but amazing
well done 5/5

thank you for the comment on mine

**smile**

I love the way that you ended this. Very well thought out. i love this! Great job. You are very talented!

Kool

october xx

Mmm. That's sad, but I liked it. I thought the general wording and flow was good/

Oh thats beautiful. u poor person. i hope things get better for u. thanx for the comment too. i'm trying to release in poems not my arm.
love willow xxoo

Nicely written
5/5
love
amy

Awww i love it. its sad but i like it. thanx for the comment on my poem.. but i cant help but give up.. ne ways amazing poem. i love it. keep it up
take care
luve angie