Beautiful poem, I think you did a wonderful job. I wasnt expecting the ending to be regret I thought it would be a normal cliche, but no this was brilliant!

xoxoxo Haley

I like the ending...abrupt, and it sort of changes the solemn tone of this poem to a little more comic.

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Great poem. keep it up, I like your stuff