Comments : Canvas

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I liked the last stanza with teh analogy/ simile of the skin being a canvas with the crimson paint. very creative. very beautiful. ttyl, Em.
    love Suz

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Ur poem is beautiful and flows very good...5/5 nice work...