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by Dante   Jun 14, 2006


If life would be a work, I would take the vacation
Getting relaxed after sincere revelation
Collecting experience from past life to create
Myself as I want to be and without things I hate

Is it too hard to leave all the things be?
Yes, because you're back in reality

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mello193

    Short but very good, you have a unique way of writting! you also have unique titles for your poems, is there a reason for that?

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Dude I feel the same way. Escape life: seems like just an unreachable dream. Good peom. I liked the emotion. It was a very good title, it caught my eye, which made me read it. I like the flow too

    Forever more-mello193

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    It really would be nice to vacation from life, short and sweet. I love it!

    5/5

    Jessie

  • 17 years ago

    by gack60

    It would be nice to take a vacation from life. this is a nice little piece that packs all you need to in a few versus.

    well done

    5/5

    Gary.

  • 17 years ago

    by xXLost in the Nightmare of LifeXx

    I like it. It isn't bad/ Brava...lol

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