The no-one girl

by Biscuit   Jun 14, 2006


She sits all alone,
with her head in her hands.
Thinking that nobody cares.
But the ones that seek her,
are not those that beat her.
They are the ones who care.

*anyone know what type of poem this is? i wrote it a while ago and i cant remember what it is anymore but i know its something (it might be set out wrong) cos i wrote it specifically to be...whatever type of poem it is!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    I really like this poem, not quite sure what type of peom it is though. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    I'm not sure what type of poem this is to be honest.

    It suffers in a few areas; repetition, lack of punctuation and flow.

    You have the ability to take this draft and create somethign much more powerful.

    I dare you to do so!

    Bret

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    No idea, but I liked it.. It was sinister and very sad.. I just loved it.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by al taylor

    I like it!

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