by I - O - W - A Jun 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I look into your eyes, you tell me its true |
A sad tale of woe, lost love and the ensuing heartbreak. I liked very much your rhyming and the flow if this piece. Milly x |
by Liz
Ohhh i really like this 4.9?/5 ill just say 5 though... :) |
by LadyPearl
Wonderful job! The only suggestion I have is to spell out Through. keep it up! |