As I Sit Alone In The Rain

by Jessica   Jun 14, 2006


I sit alone in the troubled rain
The lightning flashing and the
Heavy rainwater falling angrily..
My heart is screaming out
The pain within is too much to bear
My eyes are pouring out hateful tears
Faster than the clear rain can fall
And my perfect world has gone black..

You are gone forever
Never to return
And I just have to accept it
I just have to believe that
This is for the best
Even though this love,
Can never be replaced..

And as I sit in the pouring rain
I know that no one will ever know
The hurt that I feel
As my tears fall, so does the rain
Covering all my sadness
With drops of pain..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Oh. I thought this one was abit sad. It was nicely written and full of power and emotion. I loved these lines the most though: "The pain within is too much to bear
    My eyes are pouring out hateful tears"
    &&
    "Covering all my sadness
    With drops of pain"

    SO powerful. Great Job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    "with drops of pain" I LOVED that line. I loved this whole poem. You are such a great writer Jessy =P

    Everything in this one seemed good. No faults at all. Tehe. Awesome job! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenSoul

    That was really good!!
    I really caught the sense of anger and sadness in the poem..
    Very good use of words there..
    Well Done!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    Awwwwww, Jessy,,,this poem is sooo perfect..Every single word contains your expression well and i can imagine how you feel... Wonderful job and i really liked it!! 5/5

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