Very interesting,
Good and evil which is the God;
To whom that you prayed?
One banished an angel,
The other disobeyed.

Very Deep stanza

This style is very well developed...I enjoyed this emensly..keep it up.

Lissa

"The evil spawns your sickness,
Screech of a dying breed.
Spread like poison syringe,
For innocence to bleed"

Has to be one of the best opening stanzas I've read by a poet who isn't dead yet. Fantastically written, a beautiful read.

Wow that was...very good. you pushed some limits there and it was awesome