by Jessica Jun 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
On that hot summer day |
by Natalie
That was a bit sad. I really liked how you worded this. Cause, although it sounded abit sad, you made it have this warm feeling to it. Really good job! 5/5 =D |
by Bloomed Rose
Again, I couldn't hep reading it, because it is a love poem! nice job! |
by LadyPearl
Wonderful job, thanks for entering my contest |
The story you tell in your poem is lovely and so sweet. I liked the way you described the seasons and what happened. |
This is a really beautiful poem, sad yet shows all the good times you had and love shared, awesome job |