by Ye Seul Jun 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Let me hate you |
by Jessica
Awwwwwww.. this was soo sad.. and sweet.. i loved the last stanza best! it was so emotional.. it was amazing.. the flow in this poem was pretty good and so were your descriptions although they could have a little more detail.. but all in all.. i could feel the emotion running through me as i read! excellent write! 5/5 |