by Lucy Jun 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
All wind was crisp in love and war, |
by Becky
Wow hun this poem is amazing it has so much meaning in it, you truly are one of the most amazing writers i have read in a long time, and your so young! you have such a great vocabulary and you know so much that most people dont find out in a lifetime. amazing job, i loved it once again, keep it up 5/5 |
by uponfairywings
I love the first two and the last two lines. This is a beautiful poem every line is another creative thought and it is very beautifully written! |