I love the first two and the last two lines. This is a beautiful poem every line is another creative thought and it is very beautifully written!

xoxoxo Haley

Wow hun this poem is amazing it has so much meaning in it, you truly are one of the most amazing writers i have read in a long time, and your so young! you have such a great vocabulary and you know so much that most people dont find out in a lifetime. amazing job, i loved it once again, keep it up 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*