I loved the title of your poem "Frail Love", I think it's very appropiate for your poem and also original. I liked the descriptions you gave about your emotions and thoughts, it really made me feel a little sad.

Good job!

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Gaby

As frail as a rose to the winds of a raging storm, the love swayed from side to side.

As the rain fell so did the tears from a heart so fragile, with nowhere to turn or to confide.

^^I really, really, really liked those lines, and all the lines after it. Lol.

It was a pretty good poem too. Just try not use the words "the" "and" "a" "i" at all, even though you didn't really use them that much in this. Anywho, it was a great poem. =P And thanks for the comment.

Natalie``

That was a really interesting write, I liked how you ended the poem with a question. It really gets the reader thinking. No, hope alone cannot stand again the tide of sorrow. Time is also needed.

Driver --
Again, another wonderful poem. The flow seemed kind of forced here, but the rhyming was perfect. And, again, so was the grammar and spelling. You did a great job ;; a wonderful write. In the near future, expect more comments. =D

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

As it slowly started to rain on the inside.
To live without love would be a torture unwelcome,
As frail as a rose to the winds of a raging storm, the love swayed from side to side

[I loved these lines so much...]

This was a powerful piece. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Overall, pretty good use of words. It could be better and easier to read if you shorten your lines and make stanzas.

I really liked the ending.. It seemed to pull the whole poem together. You're a strong writer.. Keep it up.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I loved the imagery of this one especially the frail rose. I liked the way you ended with a question to leave the reader with something. I don't feel it flowed a swell as it could and in places some lines felt forced but you have a strong style and great vocab.