Wow this one is rele grea .. keep up the good work ..

I liked that confusing feeling that you feel in your sould when reading this
But i have to say that it would be flawless if these were

The tears, they won't stop flowing.
The pain, it won't stop growing.

I am backed into this corner,
like a foreigner,
stuck within someone's body
My emotions screaming loudly.

like other stanzas
You know what i mean?
hope you understand and that was just my thought
Keep it up