Great poem-it had a really nice flow to it

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Wow Stunning
I loved this line of the poem it was striking
"I can't take any more, and I don't know what else to do.
but how can I stop when my blades what saves me from you?"
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Awww...really prettyly sad.... ignore her words, they dont matter, DONT TURN BULIMIC OR LYK ANOREXIC! i alrdy got a friend dats going exercise crazy and not eating. wudnt life be better w/ hartless ppl? but w/out pain, we might become them. thats far worse. thx4 leaving comments ^^D. totally loved ur poems.

Hey...its a great poem! just wanna say thanks for commenting on my poem! means alot! well done on ur poems ur rly talented! keep it up! XoBrittoX

Hi hunny.. this is quite heartfelt. I understand your pain, and so as I could relate, it made me enjoy the feelings you convey. However, and I really mean no offence, just positive help, there are a few spellings you may want to consider editing..
'blades what saves me from you?'
Is that plural? 'blades that save me from you..' or 'blade's'..
'damage thats been done'
'That's', of 'that has'..
'become an guess just most..' is that 'and'?
Anyway, as I say, just being helpful.. other than that, I really liked reading this, and thank you for sharing your pain.. Well done, sweetie. xx

Awww...girly, I know how it feels to be called those names! But you really shouldn't let it get to you! Just ignore her and know that shes wrong and isn't worth the pain. She is saying those things because she has something to hide, so she takes all of her jealousy and pain out on you and other people. Smile! Don't let it get to you! I know that you're strong! Thanks for the comments, btw, and I'm here for you if you need to talk. Hang in there! Much love to you!

By the way, Great poem!

Another good one. I'm not particularly a fan of the self-harm and suicidal poems, simply because I wish people would stop doing it. lol the term strength comes from within isn't in the least literal, and leaving scars of memory just hasn't helped me before; so I guess my level of understanding that part of it is low. The pain however, is something I can relate to, and everyone else probably. Everyone's given some part of pain through their life, but others are hit harder with it... But anyway. This poem showed alot about pain and emotion; because even though 'numb' is a word you use when you're not experiencing the usual pain - it is a word that in this case can hurt alot over a long period of time. This write definately hits the reader and explains pain, even to those of us who don't see the use in cutting. Nicely done once again.

I don't wanna say stupid words for a sad poem... but the emotion that flows through the rhythm of it is really touching...

Thank you.

This poem is amazing.
You are a great writer.

I like this! thankz for commenting on my poem!

This was amazing! i really could relate to it and i think it had content that anyone could relate to! it flowed beautifully and kept my attention to the end! i didn't want the poem to end and yet when it did it ended gracefully and left an impression! beautifully written!

~ashley

WOW THiS POEM IS LIKE ME I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH!!

Great poem!!

nice work...

5/5

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