Abandoned (Sedoka)

by Sean Dohr   Jun 14, 2006


Unrequited love,
reciprocated anger,
childish accusations.

Destitute future,
everlasting bereavement,
permanently abandoned.

~Two stanzas, three lines, with a syllable count of 5-7-7.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I love this kind of poem! Amazing job-The format and word choice is perfect; left me speechless for a minute--- 5/5

    Keep it up-I love your work!

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    It was awsome. The way you packed the emotion in there was awsome.

    -ifihide11

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    I like it when people try something different! Short but full of emotion!! It was ver good i have never read a sedoka before!!! so a new expierence for me anyways very good liked it!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Short but so powerful! A full story told in the fine constraints of a poetry style.
    Well done! Take care and keep it up~Holly

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