I'm glad this poem was short, because I think you said everything that needed to be said concisely, and stopped after you were done. So many people keep going long after their point has been made, and drag out their idea until it is stretched too thin. Good poem.

Thank you very very much.

This is amazing really good. but it is sad

keenan

I like it alot. I can relate to the story. Very well done 5/5