by JAMIE Jun 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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by Natalie
Youre = you're =) |
by LadyPearl
Good job, you can make it better by using less "I's" Fill in words. keep it up |
This just seems like a rant/ramble to be quite honest. I think you've done MUCH better in some of your other poems. Sorry if that seems a bit harsh. |
Oh that is so sad!!!wow, gr8 work. i luvd ur use of wording! 5/5 |