Oh that is so sad!!!wow, gr8 work. i luvd ur use of wording! 5/5

This just seems like a rant/ramble to be quite honest. I think you've done MUCH better in some of your other poems. Sorry if that seems a bit harsh.

Good job, you can make it better by using less "I's" Fill in words. keep it up

Youre = you're =)

Another good one. And if its true in there that you stopped cutting, Congrats, I know how hard it is to do. You've done an excellent job on this one. And I feel like I can relate alot. And, I mean alot. Keep up the good work. You're a great writer. =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.