Denise, this was a well done poem for sure, I could feel your longing for this special person indeed, and I know how it feels. Beautifully worded. Timothy r

"The way you sing my name so slow"

This line spoke volumes to me.
The poem as a whole is absolutely breathtaking. You have written it with such astounding passion....
Sadly, this poem conveys that which many (including myself) can whole heartedly relate to.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Great poem, nicely written! keep it up! 5/5

Beautifully penned with such emotion. Good job.

This is really good Denise! ... well done

Dave.x

This is such a beautiful and powerful poem......the images that it embeds on the mind is so real. Excellent job.