Comments : Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I like the change of pace that this goes through a couple times. It's not one consistent pace.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by JarOme

    Hey! Thanks for the comment! I always return the favor! You're new huh? It's cool! reminds me to myself! You write well... you might keep on writing then you will become better i swear! Thanks... i'll keep an eye to your work!

    Thank you so much!
    Charlie

  • 17 years ago

    by Pheadrah

    Wow! that was - wow..
    I love it!