Comments : Remembering you

  • 18 years ago

    by Mr O

    That was great!

    there is truth in what is said
    Of the love that is your first
    Drink the wine of memories red
    Yet never quench your thirst.

    True love you'll not forget.

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    This poem is really good it has a nice flow! you're very talented don't let it go to waste! i can really relate to this! check out some of my work :D x