I love the perspective you exposed through this. Your writing is wonderful and I actually can feel the emotion through the words. 5/5 ^^'

SHTI!!!!!!!! swtich around the I and T...
that's hard hitting stuff right there...really touching...gosh...

tears are building in my eyes. wonderful description!!

I like the expression that comes out of reading your poems.keep writing it's good stuff.

Amazing. Truly, my eyes were huge by the end of it. Great last line too.

xxx