by Katlynn Jun 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The anger is coming out and behind |
Very clear plot to this peice, you told the story very well with a lot of power and well presented aspects |
by BrokenSoul
Omg, that was so sad.. I really liked it! |
by uponfairywings
Aw thats so sad, so pitiful but beautiful my dear! Great poem! |
Not the greatest flow but the plot and storyline are grrt...the ending was powerful and i liked it alot tho...u hav definite talent and it very obvious that ur good at this.... |