All I can say is
awwww
I loved it...very sad though....keep it up

Wow alotta talent in ur words! amazing. but im a bit confussed about the stroy. overall u r an amazing writter!! keep up the talent_never stop writting_ and stay strong

jenie

Yo dude! wasup.. hehe lol

um soo yeah about the poem.. i like.. its not my fav but its good..

o wait the poem isnt my favorite but this part is...

and realize that he gave us things
that we could NEVER give

OMGosh that line is GENIOUS! i love that part sooo soo so so so so so so so so x5498654651321 much! hehe lol =]

Awww that poems was really good but it made me very sad!
when i was reading this i had a image of it and i love poems that can do that!
keep up the good work

5/5