Alone in a crowded room

Wow-that is soo well written. You put the words together perfectly and the flow is amazing! I love the end how the way you wrote how you were feeling in the poem makes the reader feel content. I could totally picture the whole thing-Sitting in the corner watching people smile, laugh, cry---Great imagery! I also like how you ended with ''I am.'' Perfect write! 5/5

I can relate to this poem, sometimes realization strikes you in odd places and situations. Until you are content with yourself, everything else is just smoke in front of your eyes. Good write, I love the dramatic impact of how you ended the poem. 5/5

I liked that poem. It was well written, and I'm glad you didn't try to rhyme it, cuz then it just would have been bad... But i liked it as it was. Excellent poem, and I think I'm gonna read more of yours.

Ravyn

I can understand that, feeling happy and content just to be with yourself and not in the thick of things, comfortable with your own thoughts.

You did a great job putting the feeling into words. You really are an excellent writer. =) wonderful job.

Yes. Alone but not lonely. Happy with your own company. Very entertaining poem.