Killing the Poetry

by HOLLY ARMER   Jun 15, 2006


Rays of sunshine bless my skin
sweet thoughts flow from deep within
Creating euphoric waves of delight
as the day fades slowly into night

Bringing torrents of angry rain
where only distant memories remain
Flashes of light, revealing my scars
the monstrous thunder scattering stars

Watching the winds of raging deceit
destroy inspiration with fervid heat
Crashing creativity into debris
while killing the poetry inside of me

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  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Oh my God, that is awesome Holly. I so love your work. You are so accomplished. I feel like my work is child's play in comarrison. Awesome Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is such an opposite for me, I love the exhilaration of a raging storm or dark night while the sunlight/day can depress me.It is interesting to view this from such a different perspective.You have written it so well, so descriptive.I can hear/feel what you are saying, yet for myself it is reversed.A very accurate and meaningful write, however one looks at it.

    Gary J

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Amazing piece! Powerful ending, wow I just love the last stanza, your choice of words are so intriguing and fit so perfectly with the next and next... Incredible poetry, Holly!

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I love this poem, good job. It was well written and flowed well. Keep it up.
    5/5

    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathan

    I like the tone... it appeals to me for some reason.... good job!

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