Hey again. you probably don't remember me, but i remember you. anyway, back to the matter at hand.
i like this poem because of its length, sometimes its nice to read somethng short for a change. It was also written with alot of creativity and intelligence i thought, but the best part was how you managed to include all those things into this poem and still have such a great sense of rhythm and flow. bloody brillaint i think does it!

Brad

Very nicely done!! As I read along, The message was getting more darker and haunting. You've done an excellent job on it! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow Ms. Holly, this was fantastic, the last stanza blew me away, when I grow up ( If i ever do ) I want to write just like you my dear friend. Love , Tim

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

I like the tone... it appeals to me for some reason.... good job!

I love this poem, good job. It was well written and flowed well. Keep it up.
5/5

Breanna

Amazing piece! Powerful ending, wow I just love the last stanza, your choice of words are so intriguing and fit so perfectly with the next and next... Incredible poetry, Holly!

This is such an opposite for me, I love the exhilaration of a raging storm or dark night while the sunlight/day can depress me.It is interesting to view this from such a different perspective.You have written it so well, so descriptive.I can hear/feel what you are saying, yet for myself it is reversed.A very accurate and meaningful write, however one looks at it.

Gary J

Oh my God, that is awesome Holly. I so love your work. You are so accomplished. I feel like my work is child's play in comarrison. Awesome Loretta