Aching Heart

by StarGirl   Jun 15, 2006


Aching Heart

My heart aches when I dream,
about you.
My body tosses and turns.
I\'m restless.

I dream about your carressing lips
My body pressed against your body.
Your whispers of sweet nothings
and promises of passion.
A moan escapes my lips.

I've become possessed.
My aching heart dreams of you
while I wait for my aching heart
To ache no more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The passion of the agony of separation with dreams of the ecstasy of a union with the object of affection is reflected well in this poem. My heart is still racing
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was really amazing. It's cute, that you yearn for that person's kiss and touch. I think we all desire so much in life. This was really simply said, I didn't really think it was original. Sorry. This could have been written by anyone. Make your words more interesting and descriptive. It will make the reader enjoy the poem that much more. Anyways, I can relate to this feeling. Good job. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by lady webber

    Thats hot

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Aww this is so sweet and sad
    must hurt alot
    hang in there!!!

    well done

    **smile**

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