Aww this is so sweet and sad
must hurt alot
hang in there!!!

well done

**smile**

Thats hot

This was really amazing. It's cute, that you yearn for that person's kiss and touch. I think we all desire so much in life. This was really simply said, I didn't really think it was original. Sorry. This could have been written by anyone. Make your words more interesting and descriptive. It will make the reader enjoy the poem that much more. Anyways, I can relate to this feeling. Good job. 5/5.

The passion of the agony of separation with dreams of the ecstasy of a union with the object of affection is reflected well in this poem. My heart is still racing
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