I surrender all

This poem reaches out to me with imagery to express a spiritual truth that would make any transition smoother. The key word is surrender as this poem reflects a true spiritual
Experience

I am very impressed
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I get that the lines about the smiling angels are meant to be there, but it kind of got on my nerves after reading it about three times. Repitition often adds a lot of impact on a poem, but it's important not to go too overboard with repeating things, or the reader might get a little annoyed.

I liked the images your words brought to my mind. I imagined a little girl in a hospital bed, white sheets, white floors, white walls; the window was open and the room was really bright. And then three little angels, graceful in every aspect of the word, standing, smiling, gently touching the girl. Just really great.

My honest critique: 4/5

Hm. This was a unusual write to read for some reason. But, I still liked it. I thought it was well written. Umm, well done. I don't think there's anything wrong with this one quite honestly. 5/5.