You can't blame me, for your mistakes...

by smile   Jun 15, 2006


I just can't trust you,
There really is no hope trying.
I pretend to,
But i'm mentally cut up,
And left crying.

I want to believe you,
When you say your not lying.
I try to,
But mentally i'm hurt,
And left here crying.

I want to respect you.
And ease your dying.
I begin to,
But mentally you destroyed me,
Now whos left crying?

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  • 18 years ago

    by chris

    Hey i really liked this poem and how you speak of mental cuts, cause they are always deeper than anything on the outside and always leave the worst scars.
    i am deeply touched by your appriciation for my writting and the understanding that you have of my words, it can on a day that was least expected and really turned the day around. i will read all of your poems and comment on them when i can, today i am just very very tired, but soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mel

    That's very good. I particularly like the repitition and the final revelation. well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥

    .... i love this one, i like the end alot :)
    love ur choice of words too

    ...[xXx]...leah...[oOo]...
    p.s. id like to know what you think of mine. 5/5

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