.... i love this one, i like the end alot :)
love ur choice of words too

...[xXx]...leah...[oOo]...
p.s. id like to know what you think of mine. 5/5

That's very good. I particularly like the repitition and the final revelation. well done.

Hey i really liked this poem and how you speak of mental cuts, cause they are always deeper than anything on the outside and always leave the worst scars.
i am deeply touched by your appriciation for my writting and the understanding that you have of my words, it can on a day that was least expected and really turned the day around. i will read all of your poems and comment on them when i can, today i am just very very tired, but soon.