The day my love ends

by mervyn   Jun 15, 2006


Friday was the day me and u end
you were scared and waited till the weekend
you called me over to talk face 2 face
you was my angel and my warm embrace
i didn't think that me and u would end
i wish u were still my little girlfriend
you never told me the reason why
all i can say now is goodbye
i no that me and u are over now
and I'm just sitting and laying thinking how
should i sit and lay or should i die
because every time i think of you i will always cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by mervyn

    Merfen.. publish ur other ones tu.. they heapz good... n yee... can i tell the gurlz abt ur new talent? lol.. x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by mervyn

    .. goowd poem... =( we awl kno yooh missin her... buuht memba thaht everythin hapnz fo a reason... keep ur hed high... n PLEEZ keep smiling... keep writng aswel... they gwood... ^_^ ... k k ... buhbiaaz.. x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by mervyn

    .. gwoood poem merfen... ^_^ proud of yaah... yooh gawt skill.. keep gooin... lol... n ur other one... secret chik in my life... lol.. hmmmm... wondah whus thaht abt hey? *winks* haaha... naah.. itz kwl.. happi fo yooh... nwaiz... goood boi... seeyuh s2 afida... x x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Mel

    I liked that Mervyn. And your names similar to mine: Melvyn. I hate my name but I liked your confessional poem. Well done and welcome to the site.

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