by Mel Jun 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It's time to go; |
by Truest Lies
There were some rhythmic concepts which I had never considered before, and they worked out remarkably well. The poem had some repetition, the lines were small and clear, but you still managed to convey some great emotion, as though the poem spoke for itself without needing long, elegant words or anything... |
by smile
Harsh, but great poem |