by Mel Jun 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
|
It's time to go; |
by Truest Lies
|
There were some rhythmic concepts which I had never considered before, and they worked out remarkably well. The poem had some repetition, the lines were small and clear, but you still managed to convey some great emotion, as though the poem spoke for itself without needing long, elegant words or anything... |
by smile
|
Harsh, but great poem |