Falling Angel

by Raven   Jun 15, 2006


A falling angel,
Beaten and brused.
Walking in the shodows, all alone.
Crying her crimson red tears.
Lost forever in this big, black world.

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I like it. its short and sweet.. its rele good. keep writing.. ur talented.. i liek ur poems.. great job 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxslash616xxx

    I know, its just hard right now. See I dont have much faith in myself or love right now. I had a strong realationship with a girl named heather, my previous relationship. That ended, horribly and we were forced apart. Then I met you, later we were forced apart by distance. 2 just like that Im just really hurting right now. But anyway, I do and will always love you, no matter what. Theres a lot of people in this world that don't understand the meaning of love. And the fact that you understand it at your age is very rare. So you have a good gift, and u should use it well. As I told you before, someday, not soon, but someday it might work out. But for now im just gonna try and get my faith back up and find someone else, play from ear after that. I'll try to start talking to you again soon, but theres no guarantee, I was even shaking last night when I talked to you, I couldn't even stay still. I cant even cry anymore because Im all out of tears. Well, ill stop rambling now. But you should read your e-mail. I sent one to you of how im doing right now. Its not pretty but I think u should know and I just need a response. Cuz i just need serious help right now

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