Where our love once started

Great poem. i love how the last stanza repeats some lines from the rest of the poem

jamie

"Do you remember the smell of winter
That horrible October without snow
When the grey fog filled the streets
Do you still know
Those awful rainy mornings
When the birds seldom visited the streets
I walked every road a million times
And still I can't forget our hearts beat
Since you've left sun never shines
Deep in my heart that belongs to you
I memorize your smiles, your tears,
The time our feelings were true
Nobody knows how hard it burns
Or how strong it freezes without you"

^^^ Amazing.. I havent read something this good in sooo long.. the whole thing was so great but that part expecially was just amazing.. Great job keep it up 5/5

GREAT JOB! I think that By you and me should be chaanged to By you and I

I'm not much one to comment on soemthing that could very well be a song so I'm afraid I might not be much help. I do have to say that I did enjoy the final stanza, especially the part about where love first started, and I enjoyed your descriptions.

I enjoyed reading this poem, i especially liked the lines
"Nobody knows how hard it burns
Or how strong it freezes without you"
I think you did a great job! 5/5